Log Lines

While NaNoWriMo is winding down, I’m still working on “The Return.” I will continue to work on it until it’s finished, but I finally got a log line I can share. Here it is:

“Returning an abducted man to Earth intending to share technology, diplomatic efforts are thwarted by the Black Government who intends to keep alien contacts silent.”

What do you think? Does it make you want to read more? I hope so. I’ve never seen this type of premise before, so I hope it’s a fresh take on what will have some conspiracy theories thrown in. I’m still in the GMC mode (goals, motivation, conflict) and I think I’ve got most of it nailed down.

Here’s a look at four disasters and an ending:

1.The Concordance (a Vaedran Space Battleship) is shot at from Phobos (a moon of Mars) by a large spaceship with U.S.A. emblazoned on it’s side

2.Adam, two Vaedran Counselors, and a pilot are taken hostage

3.Admiral Esrith (Admiral of the Concordance) threatens to start an intergalactic war if the four men are not returned unharmed

4.General Yermolay proposes to destroy the Concordance, thus eliminating the threat and exposing the Black Government’s hidden agenda

5.Tremol and Keely McGuire propose a solution which will result in a happy ending

Stay tuned for more…

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